martes, 7 de septiembre de 2010

"Myself"

Who am I? I am Paula Cristina Abundes Mendoza, and people who know me, call me Paula. I am 20 years old; I was born the great day of August 13th, 1990, in the beautiful city of Aguascalientes, where I  live nowadays. I am studying ELT in UAA, I really enjoy the major and the university. Those aspects are just some information about me; in addition I would like that you know me more than now for that reason I will share other important aspects that are part of my life like my family, my personality, my likes and dislikes.

One of the most important aspects in my life is my family, they mean everything for me. The first people who saw me arrived to this world were my parents, Jose Luis and Maria Del Consuelo. I am so proud of them because of the love they give me and the incredible things that they have done for me. Furthermore my siblings are part of me too. Rafael was the next one after me; I enjoy being with him we have a great relation we are like friends. Andrea is the third one among my siblings and me. I have a close relation with her, although sometimes she gets angry because I bother her. My little sister is Mariana, the relationship between my sister and me is good, but sometimes she does not spend time with me because I joke with her, and she does not like that aspect of me. My dog belongs to my life too, its name is Pelucas, and I usually play with it in my free time. My family is very important for me, and I enjoy being with them, because I love them.



Every person has strengths and weaknesses, for that reason part of my personality will be written in the next lines. One of the strengths that characterize me, it is my friendliness. People who know me, describe me as a person who knows hear carefully to other and give good advices. In addition I try to be a good friend supporting my friends when they need me, they know that I will always be there for them. Patience is a word that describes me very well, for that reason it is another of my strengths. I am always tolerant with people; I try to understand them. Weaknesses in me are so notorious. The first weakness is my insecurity, and I am working on disappear it. That happens to me because I am always thinking about what people could say or think about me. Also my weak character is part of me. I show weakness when I have to say something or defend myself, but I do not say anything, because I get nervous, and sometimes people take advantage of that. Although I have good strengths in my life, weaknesses are part of me and are part of my personality.

To finish with my principal personality traits I will share my likes and dislikes. I really enjoy watching every kind of movies with my friends, but I prefer comedy movies. Besides I like to listen  to pop and R&B music, I usually listen to Rihanna, Lily Allen, Belanova, Playa Limbo, etc. Although in this time of my life I do not do any sport, I feel good doing exercise. I love to dance, all kind of music, except duranguense music. The last and the most important thing that I enjoy, it is spending time with my family it does not matter where we go, or what we do, we always have good moments together. On the other hand I have dislikes too. I hate to get up early, because then I get angry. Also I do not like to read, even though I know that it is really important to read. I detest to go to the grocery store when it is sunny, because then I get a headache. Those likes and dislikes are the ones that describe me very well.


To conclude, I know that I am not a perfect person I have strengths and weaknesses, but my family make me feel comfortable, I really love my life. I am so thankful with God, for the things that He gives me, the excellent family that I have and for the person that I am, because I have the essential to live, and I do not need anything, although there are aspects of me that I do not like. People could think that is something missing in my life, but I am sure that is not true, I am so happy with all that I have, and all the people who love me. Now you know a little bit more about me and my family.

1 comentario:

  1. Hi Pola!!!
    I liked you essay much. You developed your ideas in a good way and you linked the first sentence with the information in each paragraph.

    The size of your paragraphs are different: the first and the last ones are small and the 2nd, 3rd and 4th are too long, so pay attention to this.

    You also have some grammar mistakes:
    I like to listen pop... - I like to listen TO pop..
    People not always will be smiling or joking- People will not always be smiling...

    You used a lot the word "relation", that is not correct. The correct word is realtionship...

    But in general, I liked your essay... It is so good...

    Bye!!!

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